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Task Force: Xi Take Two

November 4th, 2011, 4:39 pm

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Reply Meta Knight the Hedgehog, November 4th, 2011, 4:39 pm

Take two. It's going to be a strip each comic. So, Fly Or Fail? And if it's a fail, advice?

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Reply Anapona, November 4th, 2011, 4:42 pm

Aw come on that's cheating, Leeroy Jenkins makes everything better :I

Reply Tex, November 4th, 2011, 4:53 pm


For one, the panels are far too big. Having all six of these guys in every comic would be troublesome on its own actually. Perhaps feature only a few of them in one comic at a time. Also, that explosion effect does NOT match the 8-bit theme...

I don't know who any of those guys are, so introduce them one or two at a time before anything. That should amount to 3-6 intro strips.

Try not to just throw in too much stupid humor. I love stupid humor, but not alot of people do. Think jokes over, and make sure the punchline makes a few people smirk instead of just rolling their eyes.

The facial expressions, or rather just the eyes are kind of out of sync. This is an issue with having all six of em in one strip.

Strip comics rarely have a well-structured plot, this is true. However, try to add a LITTLE continuity. A great example is Neko the kitty. However, that comic went from simple strips, to full blown colored strips with a random plot.

Reply Meta Knight the Hedgehog, November 4th, 2011, 4:56 pm

@Tex: Good Idea. But I don't want to spam Fly or Fail, so I'll start the intros and make a quick banner and such.

Reply TheProjectCore, November 4th, 2011, 5:00 pm

Fail still looks like crap

Reply supersonicfan0, November 4th, 2011, 8:19 pm

you should make the panels smaller, use less complicated effects, and do some intros to give the characters personality. if you can do all this, and the jokes are good, then it's a fly.

Reply Melvyn Lennard, November 5th, 2011, 5:43 am

This fail was very much sad, and failing.

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