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Alex the hedgehog

January 11th, 2012, 5:38 pm

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Author's Comments:

Reply Alex the Great, January 11th, 2012, 5:42 pm

this baby took a week to make, a week! that sets a record for me! well half of the time i was waitin for AG to tell me if it was okay to use chase but still

fly or fail?
my goal is to get melvynn to fly one of my comics

edit: wait just read and i realize it's a bit difficult to read... i'll change that in final version, it still shouldn't be that challenging to understand, your smart, you'll get it i won't bore you with a play by play

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User's Comments:

Reply Tex, January 11th, 2012, 5:48 pm

I have a hatred of hedgehogs in general, but I suppose it's got an interesting premise.

Work on the mouths, they seem a little.. Huge.

Conditional fly.

Reply nyancat6650, January 11th, 2012, 7:10 pm

EVERYBODY SUPER SONIC FLYING

Reply Alex the Great, January 11th, 2012, 7:13 pm

CHECK OUT WHAT I FOUND
"I'm on the fence... Though if I had to pick I'd say fly.

I'm on the fence because I don't really have anything to say about this :P "
-melvynn

http://flyorfail.smackjeeves.com/comics/1317841/beginning-intro/

Reply supersonicfan0, January 11th, 2012, 7:14 pm

@Alex the Great: i didn't believe it until i saw it.

Reply Firecat1311, January 12th, 2012, 10:34 am

@Tex: Those darn anthropomorphic hedghogs breed like rabbits. And the internet is their mating ground.

THEY ARE EVERYWHERE. It gets annoying after a while.

About the comic, probably fly.

Reply Alex the Great, January 12th, 2012, 3:50 pm

@Tex: don't be racist!
=D

Reply Floydyboy, January 12th, 2012, 5:30 pm

The comic is JPEG'd, sprites are pillow shaded, mouths are unnecessarily huge while the eyes barely show any emotion.

Oh, and I have no idea what's going on. Who are these people? Are they heroes or villains? How did they get up to where that guy was so quickly? WHY DID THE BOXES EXPLODE?

Until you can fix those, this is a fail.

Reply Pizzaman_Colors, January 13th, 2012, 12:47 am

I'd say something but Floyd already said it

Reply nyancat6650, January 13th, 2012, 4:21 pm

@Floydyboy: I just now realized it was saved in .JPEG...
NOOOOOOOOOOOOO

Reply Alex the Great, January 13th, 2012, 4:45 pm

@Floydyboy: had to save it in jpeg because it was too awesome for png, plus what's bad with big mouths and box's explode when people shoot them with gernade bullets

Reply Melvyn Lennard, January 14th, 2012, 5:18 am

Hey, I've flied a few comics before.
http://flyorfail.smackjeeves.com/comics/1364593/peace-of-mind-ss4453/
http://flyorfail.smackjeeves.com/comics/1312733/slot-the-hedghog/

I felt it was a tl;dr. To be honest a serious story is great and would interest me, but something about hedgehog heads on human bodies as well as them holding guns feels a bit... off.

I appreciate that it's your style but I think it's a fail.

Reply SyeedGenerationss, January 14th, 2012, 11:36 am

Fail

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