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The HOME Vidio Game

March 13th, 2012, 1:29 am

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Reply TheProjectCore, March 13th, 2012, 1:34 am

It could go either way. You're grammer and spelling need work but the overall plot I like.

Reply 1ce_k1d, March 13th, 2012, 1:35 am

@TheProjectCore: =D

Reply Melvyn Lennard, March 13th, 2012, 3:02 am

Hey guys >:D

Grammar and spelling could do with some work, but I don't like the pretty much void wasteland. LAAAAZY. By the way, "the crystal DS"? What significance does that have?! You can't just throw that in there and expect people to be like "OH LOOK, THAT'S THE ALL IMPORTANT PLOT DEVICE THEY HAVE TO GET!! DH VIPHSDVBIP" You get the drill.

Video game worlds colliding is getting old, fast. You're sprite work, also, especially in the 5th panel needs more work as well. I don't even know what's going on in that panel.

So, yeah, Fail.

Reply 321TaTer, March 13th, 2012, 11:43 am

wut marv and nyan sed

Reply 1ce_k1d, March 13th, 2012, 1:38 pm


Reply PrincesTomboy, March 15th, 2012, 11:56 pm

You'd have to be REALLY good at story to make this work- too overdone and too predictable from what we've been shown. One more for fail.

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