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Wily-Bots Pilot: Don't Mess With A Spring-Head

July 12th, 2012, 5:30 pm

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Reply DUDEVSTHEWORLD, July 12th, 2012, 5:35 pm

AUTHOR'S NOTE It's DUDEVSTHEWORLD here. This is a first strip for a comic I made up. It is about the daily lives of the stage enemies from Mega Man. Do you like it? Should I cover the lives of the Robot Masters as well? Any suggestions? Respond in the comments below.

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User's Comments:

Reply awsome guy, July 12th, 2012, 6:56 pm

try using a different speech bubble style and a different sizing technique

Reply Neon the Sniper Joe, July 12th, 2012, 7:09 pm

Fail. Sorry.

Reply Melvyn Lennard, July 14th, 2012, 5:18 am

This is very interesting actually. It's kinda blurry which definitely needs fixing. Speech bubbles need to be in the order of who's talking from top to bottom. It was kinda confusing to read this. To indicate movement, don't use three small arrows. Instead, use a blur effect. Or, if you can't, use thin black lines from the top of the sprite to the bottom of the sprite with about 10 pixel spacing. Finally, try to veer away from making sprites thinner, as in the last panel. If some sprites are too big to fit everything on, either remove some stuff, make the panel bigger or simply use Re-size/Re-skew to evenly shrink or grow your character.

If I'm honest I like the idea, but your comic creating styles definitely need to be brushed upon, so I'm currently on the fence, at least until I see more :3

Reply supersonicfan0, July 14th, 2012, 6:23 am

@Melvyn Lennard: did you forget to log out and your brother/sister posted this comment without realizing that you were still logged on?

nah. I'm kidding.

as for the comic, I'm kinda neutral on this.

Reply Melvyn Lennard, July 14th, 2012, 6:37 am

@supersonicfan0: I could see why you would think that :P

Reply dolphinCult, July 17th, 2012, 9:20 pm

powerpoint? i remember those days

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